just so, i don`t know too much of food changing, as i was born in the time, i haven`t experienced too much of the food changing as i can.
这位朋友,不是打击你,如果雅思结尾你真这么写,那么说明你连雅思作文的要求都还没有了解。不过,你比我好,昨天我的结尾记得是
... Undeniably, the advantages of food changing by homogenised far outweigh disad(就写到这里考官叫停笔了,不敢往下写,应该还有一句。。。)