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Some people say it is impossible to live comfortably in the large cities.
What the problems faced with people living in large cities?
What can be done to help solve the problems?
Nowadays,with the rapid urbanizations,despite there are a lot of benefits,more and more city ills have become more often and comman than ever before.As a result,urban inhabitants begin to complain that it’s much more uncomfortable to live in big cities.Hence,it’s indispensable for the relevant government departments to take some measures to solve those problems.
The most obvious headache to cities is overcrowdedness.With Tens of thousand and even millions people,the cities are usually crowded every where.The city traffics are usually found to be heavy,especially during rush hours.That is quite inconvenient for people going around.
Secondly,competition in cities is more astonishing.Thus,heavy life burden is imposed on people,who may also be worried about the problem of unemployment.In addition,some people could even have mental diseases,which are potential threats to the society.
Accordingly,the relevant government agencies should be concerned about those city sikenesses,and some measures should be taken to solve those problems.For instance,we can replace the cross-roads with best-designed bridges or flyovers.More real-time information about the city’s transport flows should be shown to the pulic by radio or outdoor screens,so that people can try to avoid going to those ares in traffic jams.Free psychological consultations are supposed to provided for those in need.
In summary,it’s an indisputable fact that cities are facing more problems from urbanization.But if some concerns and meassures are given,inhabitants will not be that uncomfortablly to live in large cities. |
发表于 2-11-2011 20:16:44
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