英文是原文，中文是我的学习心得。
Some milk drinkers like what they call "real milk," also known as raw milk.
多么朴实无华，甚至有点口语化的句子阿，...what they call...also known as...我在写作考试中大概用了3/4遍
This is milk that has not been pasteurized or homogenized.
this is...that...解释某种东西的超级简单实用句式
has/have been done 完成+被动，高中就应该会的东西
Homogenization is the mixing process that keeps all the fat from rising to the top. Pasteurization kills bacteria with heat. Ultra-pasteurized milk is quickly heated to an even higher temperature, which keeps it fresh in stores longer.
这三句话连起来看...英语还是挺美的(请忽略Homogenization等专业用词)。第一句解释：xxx is sth that ... 第二句主动：xxx kills... 第三句被动：sth is heated...
再加个which从句调剂一下~perfect!
In the United States, health officials warn that drinking raw milk can be dangerous and even deadly.
But the popularity seems to be growing.
转折必备句
Raw milk is often used in specialty cheeses. Supporters say raw tastes better than pasteurized, though not everyone can taste a difference.
如果你也觉得some people claim that...已经很滥了，就用supporters say吧
In all of the fifty states but Michigan, people are permitted to buy raw milk for animals.
又是一个被动
But only farms in twenty-eight states can sell it for humans, under restrictions that differ from state to state.
低调的从句
People may also buy raw milk in stores in California, Connecticut, Maine, New Mexico and South Carolina.
细节谁都会喜欢，shanghai, beijing, qingdao...而且还可以凑字数
Some people who live where the sale of raw milk is banned get it through a system of cow shares.
好复杂，写个一两句那是必需的，让你看起来有深度
People buy shares of a cow or a herd of cows. This way, the milk belongs to them as owners.
This way...承上启下
Other people get raw milk through milk clubs or cooperatives. Some of these clubs operate outside the law.
outside the law = illegally 茴字有很多写法
One man in Maryland has for years enjoyed thinking that he might be doing something illegal by buying raw milk.
又是一个复杂句
He had no idea it was legal there. legal与上面的outside the law呼应
In nineteen twenty-four the United States Public Health Service proposed rules against the interstate sale of raw milk. Today forty-six states have passed what is known as the Pasteurized Milk Ordinance. The exceptions are Pennsylvania, California, New York and Maryland.
...没啥好说的
Earlier this year, federal health officials had another warning for the public about raw milk. They warned of the risks from bacteria including salmonella, E. coli, Listeria, campylobacter and brucella.
have another warning = warn of 多样性阿，多样性 including...细节化阿，细节化
The warning said there is no meaningful nutritional difference between pasteurized and raw milk, as supporters say. And it said raw milk does not contain compounds that naturally kill harmful bacteria, as some also say.
Activists accuse the government of a prejudice against raw milk.
acuuse sb of a prejudice against...实在太好用了
They argue that outbreaks of sickness from drinking it are not as widespread as reports have suggested.
as...as...
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