准备复议了

mrcoder

总成绩        听力        阅读        写作        口语
7        7.5        7        5.5        7
写作再怎么差也不应该低于6分啊。我考完默写了一遍（尽量保持了原样，包括我已知的错误），找ielts-blog评分Task1、Task2都是给的6.5。原以为移民类松一点能冲七呢。谁料想连6都不到。
求祝福。

panadol

是不是国内考?模板的作文?
anyway.祝福复议成功

小兔菲菲

看你成绩的实力，我觉得写作肯定不止5.5。。。

matt_deepblue

是模版的作文吗？
去试试吧，祝你好运

sowot

支持复议，但是提升1.5分到7分可能性不太大。

cnni

支持复议，上6应该不大吧，希望能上6.5

ketaotao

一定要复议，请参考我的复议结果。

ketaotao

什么是会议评估？

laughter555

good luck

sowot

原帖由 ketaotao 于 16-12-2011 17:16 发表

                               
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什么是会议评估？

是会计评估。。。。

mrcoder

我估计有可能是判为模板了。但是不是现成的模板，开头模板的痕迹重一些。贴出来给大家看看吧，顺便求批。
小作文可能TA有丢分，最后一问的when will you be available我理解成什么时候可以接电话了。因为我们公司写邮件的时候，大家都会说我什么时候不在公司，都是说available at 某个电话号码。（也不知道这样说对不对哈。）
You want to volunteer to help the old people of your community. An organization in your area works for the benefit of old people. Write a letter to the in-charge of that organization explaining:
1. Why do you want to help
2. How can you help them
3. When will you be available

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to enquire if I could do some work for your organization to provide some support to the elderly in the community. I understand that it would be voluntary and payment would not be necessary.

I come from a rural area of China. And when I was in the college I got numerous support from the society economically and emotionally. I just graduated this July, and I believe this is a good time to support back.

I am a software engineer, and if there is any work that entails computer repairing or software usage, I will be very delighted to provided help. I can do other things, however, like laundry work or cleaning. I would like to discuss with you further, and I am available at 010 12345678 every Monday and Wednesday morning through 9 O'clock to 12 O'clock.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,
Jake

[ 本帖最后由 mrcoder 于 17-12-2011 01:08 编辑 ]

mrcoder

大作文：

Some people are interested in national news, others think it is important to know about international news, discuss both views and give your opinion.

The past few decades have seen a considerable increase in the attention paid to the news. Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether the national news is more important than international news. In this essay, I will explore both views and provide my opinion.

Admittedly, national news is more related with our daily lives, be it the coming storm or the rise in CPI of last month. Therefore, there is no surprise that people would like to know about national news. Secondly, national news tends to be more reliable. This is due to the fact that, if it is not acquired from the original source, international news is often filtered or event modified by the government censorship. So people will get mislead.

Whilst the above discussion is valid, personally I believe that the benefits of knowing about international new far outweigh its drawbacks. Firstly, it is important to know about what happens in other countries, if one is doing trade globally, especially if he or she is trading oil or gold. Knowing about international news will help him or her to make wise decision. Secondly, as the borders across different countries are blurring, it requires us to know more about other cultures. Watching international news is a fantastic way to communicate. Thirdly, people can take advantage of know about international news. For example, when the price of house declined in America, many Chinese people went there and bought many houses and sold at a higher price later.

By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that both national and international news are important to us. And people should choose to learn about depends on their own situation.

mrcoder

我倒也不指望一定上七，就像ketaotao说的，我至少可以找回点自信。最差的情况维持原判，我也知道自己在写作上的差距了，有的放矢的复习。

谢谢各位。

auimmi

应该是模板的原因吧，第一段和最后一段是九分作文里的句子吧？因为当初我也觉得这些句子很漂亮，有背过

walnutP

支持复议，至少应该上6

sarahfox

羡慕楼上的进度，WA475.。。。我也要。。。。。。。。。。

discover

支持复议！
复议完了别忘来分享结果。

mrcoder

复议结果出来了——6.5
郁闷的是二雅的成绩口语作文都比一雅还低0.5分。

滚滚雷声

原帖由 mrcoder 于 6-2-2012 04:19 发表

                               
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复议结果出来了——6.5
郁闷的是二雅的成绩口语作文都比一雅还低0.5分。

安慰一下！好歹全过6了，可以申请一部分176了。
你的作文的模板痕迹比较多，稍微活泼点就能到7分了。
阅卷的看几百个firstlysecondly之类的套套，估计是要腻烦的。

yanalxy

你就复议写作好了，干嘛复议口语把分给降了

Serin

LS同学看错了。LZ说的是二雅的成绩比一雅低，不是复议减分了。吓了我一跳，这是从来没发生过，也不可能发生的事情。

陈赖

看得我也想去复议了

auimmi

原帖由 mrcoder 于 6-2-2012 04:19 发表

                               
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复议结果出来了——6.5
郁闷的是二雅的成绩口语作文都比一雅还低0.5分。

恭喜阿！整整高了一份，应该很多洲担保都可以了吧。

mrcoder

你的VET怎么样了？

startin2013

俺们家也是作文从5.5复议到6.5....
所以感觉还行分数不行的时候一定要复议！！

auimmi

说我的ref letter看起来像复印件，让推荐人再用蓝色笔签了邮寄过去，还有工资单什么的，补了料，忐忑等待中。

climber2002

一定要复议啊，反正最多就损失千把块钱