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就看了第一篇，大致改了一下，我觉得基本问题在于介词不地道，衔接稍显生硬但没啥大碍，我自己也好久没碰科班的东西了，不知道改的对不对，欢迎大家拍砖。
Dear Sam,
How is everything going with you? It has been a long time since we last met. I am sorry for not writing to you for such a long time, because I have been searching for a new house in the last few weeks.
Happily my effort was not in vain. I am happy to tell you that I have moved into a new house last week. As you already knew, my previous house was quite close to a factory which made terrible noise constantly. Moreover, there was a hole in the roof, which was always leaky in the rainy days, and the landlord refused to fix. I was tired about that house indeed.
As I mentioned, I found another house ten days ago. This house was built five years ago. It is almost new. The surrounding environment is very quiet. I think I can have good sleeps here. The most important thing is that this house is just two kilometers away from my company. I don’t need to drive to work everyday anymore.
By the way, I am planning to hold a party in the new house this weekend. Will you be free to join? You will be among the first bunch of visitors if you could come. Please tell me whether you are coming.
Yours,
Sam
2011-10-17
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发表于 17-10-2011 12:15:17