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danwong

It is not uncommon that people travel by air more frequently than before. In terms of air travel, the topic that whether the air travel companys should offer a vast number of cheap tickets has triggered hot discussions.

Since those who usually travel by air benefit from the cheap tickets. They hold the view that more and more cheap air travel should be provided in order to meet the demand of the consumers. Firstly, cheap air travel boosts the communications of ecommony and science. For it means that more and more bussinessmen and scientists ,indeed, have more opportunities to attend international confferences than before. Secondly, cheap tickets maxsize the benefits of both the passengers and travel companies. Not only can the passengers save both money and time, but also the travel commpanys can sell more tickets and expand new flights. Thirdly, scinetists can gain a vast mount of experence from the travel flight. It may be used to help human to travle among planets, someday.

In contrast, some people do not hold such optimistic opinions. Regardless of convinence and economic benefits, they insist that the eniverment and saftey should be taken into consideration. The air travel is one of the major reasons of global warming hazard. If the tickets were not so cheap, this hazard would have not been as serious as right now. They also worry that the  tickets are so cheap that it will take the planes more time to fly than before. Therefore, the air travel compay may cut off the time of examing and repairing the plane. It is a potential danger that people must pay attention to.

Overall, both sides' opinions are resonable. In this day and age, people can not live without air travel. So the cheap air travel is neccessary. And I also support that more attentions should be paid to these derived problems.

[ 本帖最后由 danwong 于 5-4-2011 18:45 编辑 ]