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I want to write diary here,don‘t I?

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发表于 7-9-2012 13:07:50 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式

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Currently I have a good window phase that I am not busy in office. Could I write diary here everyday?

Learning english silently is very boring. It seems that I am lack of fortitude. Come on, guys, give me power, eagerness!

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发表于 7-9-2012 13:13:41 | 只看该作者
Here comes the power
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 楼主| 发表于 7-9-2012 15:44:27 | 只看该作者

Today's writing practice


Recently one joke is popular in the weibo.com. One woman used her husband's iPad in her best girl friend's home. She found the WIFI was connected into wireless home network of her friend automatically. What’s the matter? The word "automatically" is highlighted.

Sometimes, the high technology will make your family into trouble if you can't handle them smoothly. that is what you can learn from this joke. Another joke is about the QQ friends. this website has one function that it can refer some persons who are related with your social relationship. Someone complained that the function referred his ex-girl friend to his girl friend with the reason that 'you might have same person who you are like". Is anything the matter?

Nowadays we are living in a style which life is involved in high technology deeply. Even though these case are jokes, you also believe that high technology will lead you into trouble as well as it makes lift more convenient, simpler.

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I try to finish the practice in 20 minutes. Although it is the familar topic, there is difficult to me to complete it in requested time.
写完发现好多错误啊,欢迎朋友们吐槽、拍砖

[ 本帖最后由 mxria 于 7-9-2012 15:47 编辑 ]
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发表于 7-9-2012 15:49:26 | 只看该作者
She should check which connection is made as "default"
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发表于 7-9-2012 15:50:44 | 只看该作者
给你每段要写的东西定个主题吧
或者你有20分钟的话写个雅思小作文也好
这样瞎写没啥意思。。
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 楼主| 发表于 7-9-2012 15:55:18 | 只看该作者
嗯,好意见,我想写下来主要还是希望锻炼口语,不过,完全接受你的意见,考虑找写作的题目列出来,每天随即抽一个主题,20分钟中完成

亲,有你们回复,我不至于很寂寞啊,在单位要装作很忙的样子,貌似只有打开word文档写.........

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发表于 7-9-2012 21:44:05 | 只看该作者
口语和写作是totally 不一样!!!
万千不要进入误区。
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 楼主| 发表于 12-9-2012 18:51:21 | 只看该作者
谢谢老土豆提醒,很重要的观点

继续这个艰难的活,我尽量保持我的注意力在于谈话,选择热点描述描述

The conflict between Japan and China is escalating recently. Peoples are involving in the argument of how to respect their patriotism. I believe that we all have a heart in love of our country. You love your country deeply, don't you? However, it doesn't mean that someone could destroy the belongings such as auto-car, the restaurants even though it has a brand which is from Japan.
In my opinion, we should pay attention to promote ourselves and try to buy or use national products, but we could not destroy.
Secondly, we must ensure that our behaviors are legally and reasonable. It is not helpful that we just eject the angry emotions.
Finally, your action must be effective to fight back to enemy. Who is your enemy? What will cause the loss of Japan really?  So, I think we should make our country more strong.

老鸟们继续指点啊,我感觉即使不是写下来,就是2个人面对面,能talk出自己的观点也不容易啊  patriotism 这个词是查了以后再知道的。。。。。。
哎,要想做到跟一个老外一起吹吹牛的程度,难于上蜀道啊。。。。。。。。。
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发表于 17-9-2012 16:15:22 | 只看该作者
destroy 是及物动词 不能单独使用,后面要加宾语。
are legal and reasonable
enemy 前应该要加冠词或其他形容词吧?
what will cause  the loss of Japan 貌似Chinlish
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 楼主| 发表于 19-9-2012 23:24:38 | 只看该作者
楼上正解,谢谢!继续努力
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发表于 6-10-2012 13:08:40 | 只看该作者
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发表于 6-10-2012 13:15:40 | 只看该作者
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我是觉得如果不考试的话,主要可以去练听力玩。
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